my holiday Daimante poem

WALT-  write a Daimante poem about our up coming holidays.

We created this by using 6 nouns 4 adjectives and 3 verbs to make a Diamond.

Reflection-

two stars one wish-

I liked how I did the cool palm tree background. I also liked how I put the colour green on the writing

Next time I want to do a lot more detail.

the fierce tiger.

 WALT-organise our ideas to write a narrative using the elements of a narrative story.

I wrote a 6 sentence narrative story to learn the elements of a narrative.

Reflection - I liked that I put the mum tiger with lipstick    because she looks good.

I also liked that I put a flower for the start   because it looks amazing.

next time I might put some more funny sentences.

Reflection I like that